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You have received the following email from your English-speaking friend:
|.............Thanks for inviting me to stay with you when I visit your country next month. I'm not sure how to get to your apartment from the airport. Could you write back giving me some basic instructions? What would be the best method of transport for me? I'd prefer one that isn't too expensive! Just one other thing - what will the weather be like when I get there? (Just so I'll know what clothes to pack!) .........|
Write your email/letter of reply to your friend (around 140-190 words).
Read Danielle's answer to this question below. Try correcting the piece of writing yourself first: use the marking codes to think about what might be wrong (or what's good) about the piece of work. Then when you're ready, click the green buttons in the text for our feedback.
| Hy S
You have no idea how happy I am, thinking there are only several days until your arrival.Gd
In connexion with your questions, I'll try to tell you how can you reach to-
Now, the second issue of WW
I'm looking forward to your arrival.
See you soon.
This is a very good answer, Danielle! You have covered all of the points in the task and your advice is really useful. You have managed most of the time to achieve a friendly, "chatty" style, which is just right for this particular task.
None of the errors you have made are that serious, and you have a good level and range of language.
/\ Word(s) missing
- Omit word
PE Poorly expressed
SS Sentence Structure
WF Wrong form
WO Word order
WT Wrong tense
WW Wrong word