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Last year a new sport and leisure centre opened in your home town. You have recently received the following letter from the manager of the centre:
|I am writing to all members of the Active Leisure Club to thank you for your custom over the last year. We want to make the facilities even better this year! Please send a short report to us, telling us what you think are the best and worst aspects of the club. We also want to hear your suggestions for new facilities...|
Write your report to the manager of the club (between 140-190 words).
Read Ling's answer to this question below. Try correcting the piece of writing yourself first: use the marking codes to think about what might be wrong (or what's good) about the piece of work. Then when you're ready, click the green buttons in the text for our feedback.
The aim of this report is to summarize the best and worst aspects of the club. Gd
The variety WF
The facilities are not opened WF
To conclude, the facilities are well-organized but there are some suggestions of WW
This is a well-structured report, Ling, which covers all the necessary points. There are a number of occasions where your choice of expression isn't quite right so I have made a number of suggestions for you to study. This is a fairly good attempt at the task, nevertheless!
/\ Word(s) missing
- Omit word
PE Poorly expressed
SS Sentence Structure
WF Wrong form
WO Word order
WT Wrong tense
WW Wrong word