Cambridge English: Advanced

Put the film title in 'inverted commas'.

A good idea to include a statement like this.

A good idea to use the present tense as this is generally used in reviews to make the action seem more immediate. The present continuous 'is suffering' would be a better choice here.

Try something like: 'has a short life expectancy' or, less formally, 'isn't expected to live for very long'.

You can refer to a 'womaniser' or a 'womanising man'. Good choice of vocabulary!

Do you mean 'relationship'? A 'date' usually means one night only!

I think you mean 'falling in love'.

This would be better as 'she is a lovely girl and full of joy' or 'she is a lovely, joyful girl'.

This could be expressed as 'and embraces it with open arms'.

This should be 'strength'

This section is very well expressed.

Choose another word instead of repeating 'delight'. How about 'thrill' or 'please us greatly'? The examiner cannot reward you for using the same word twice, even if the meaning is spot on!

A very well-constructed sentence.

This should be 'what the real value of life is '.

This last sentence is a bit of an anticlimax! Your review would be fine without it OR perhaps add a bit more by saying something like: 'You will enjoy watching this film but bring a box of tissues!'