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Writing Paper: Part 2
Task type: Informal letter

Question
You have received the following email from your English penfriend.

>It's a really brave step to take a year out of
>college to come and spend 6 months in the
>UK! What are you planning to do with your
>time? Find a job? Learn some new skills?
>Write back and give me more details of your
>plans so I can do my best to help you have a
>good time...

Write your letter of reply to your penfriend. (around 120-180 words)



Name: Justyna

School: Grammar School in Lodz, Poland

How are you? {1} It's taken me ages to reply but I was terribly busy with establishing details of my trip to London. I appreciate it, that you are willing to{***} {2}. Frankly, I'm exhausted. Sometimes I think that's {3} not {***} {4} 6-month stay but at least {***} 6-year one.

Generally the main reason I go {5} to the UK is to develop my language skills. I don't have any experience in working abroad so I chose waitressing. I think it would be perfect to spend evenings working whereas daytime would be devoted for {6} sightseeing as well as meeting my friends.

I'm keen on visiting Kew Gardens and Tower Castle. However, I've dreamt about seeing Big Ben since I was a child too.

What about details of the trip{***} {7} I've just fixed my departure time. It will be June the 7th, at 8 am. As far as I know the flight lasts four hours so I should turn up at Heathrow near midday.

I hope we will meet soon in London. Keep smiling!

Love,

Justyna

PS: Give my love to the whole family, especially to Richard. Tell him not to worry. I'll try to help him with that project. {8}



Feedback

This is a lovely letter Justyna! You give your penfriend a clear idea of how you're planning to spend your time in the UK and when you're planning to arrive. The letter is very well organised with each paragraph dealing with a specific topic and you've also made good use of linking words to create some complex sentences. The tone of the letter is just right with friendly questions and good use of contractions.
All in all a very good attempt!

Best wishes

Peter Travis
18.02.05
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