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Paper: Part 2 Question
Write your article for the magazine (around 120-180 words). |
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Answer Click on the underlined words or phrases for comments. The numbers in brackets offer suggestions. General feedback appears below the essay. |
Name: nadan
School: Everyday English TV: Is it a good thing? Television is one of the most important inventions of the century.Almost everyone owns a TV set at home today. Be it educational or entertainment life would be so boring without one nowadays. First of all, thanks to television we have the latest information at our fingertips. We are constantly informed of what is happening around the world without leaving home. Furthermore, television has made learning at home possible. In fact, some tv stations dedicate their programmes to specific interests. A further advantage is that old people living alone find television a {1} very good company. It helps them forget their loneliness. On the other hand, too much television can create problems in the family. If it {***} {2}not the constant argument of which channel to watch, it is the isolation of family members. One{3} watching television doesn't feel like talking or being disturbed as they are so absorbed in what they are watching. Hence, the term 'couch potato'. Too much television implies {***} lack of outdoor activities and we find that there are less{4} and less people taking exercises. Television, nevertheless, remains one of the most interesting inventions. Carefully controlled viewing makes it an indispensable instrument in our daily lives{***} {5} otherwise, it can turn into an addiction with harmful consequences. |
| Feedback This essay demonstrates excellent language control; it is virtually error-free and the register is consistently formal. Let's look closely at the task itself now. Today's television: "A load of old rubbish" or "More choice than ever before"? Is today's television still good value for money? Unfortunately you don't really get to grips with the abaove questions. What you have written is more of a generalised essay on TV rather than a comment on its quality and value for money. You have to be very careful in the exam to answer all aspects of the tasks or you could lose valuable marks. To sum up, therefore, there are no problems in terms of language expression - just make sure that you pay close attention to the task in the exam and answer the right question! Good luck in the Writing Paper - you certainly have the ability to do very well! Best wishes Fiona Joseph 31.10.01 |
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