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Writing Class: Informal Letter


Task Type: Informal Letter

Question
You have received the following letter from your English-speaking friend:

...We're doing a project this month at school on eating habits and customs around the world. Will you be able to help me by telling me what the traditional meals are in your country, what people typically eat and at what time of day?

Thanks very much!

Love Alison

Write a letter to your friend giving her the information she needs (around 140-190 words).

Makeover: Magda

Read Magda's answer to this question below. Try correcting the piece of writing yourself first: use the marking codes to think about what might be wrong (or what's good) about the piece of work. Then when you're ready, click the green buttons in the text for our feedback.

Dear Alison

I was very happy to hear from you. I will be glad to help you with your project, and I hope that I can give you some details you could use. Gd

Mostly WW the - Polish people have breakfast before 7 am - some slices of bread and butter, cheese, tomato, or cucumber and ham. They drink coffee with milk or tea.

We usually don't WO eat until we return home after work - i.e. about 4 pm. Then we eat /\ main meal of the day which usually consists of: P soup for the first course and /\ piece of meat, potatoes and salad for the second.

O Sometimes we have some sweets for dessert.

Between 7 and 8 pm most Polish families have their supper P which resembles breakfast but it is more heavy WW (which isn't very healthy).

Good luck with your project! Gd

Love,

Magda

Feedback

This is a very informative answer, Magda. You give your friend a good picture of the eating habits of Polish people (menu, times, etc). The letter is nicely organised and I like the way you achieve a friendly tone at the beginning and end - just right for an informal letter.
The (few) language errors are not serious ones and your grammatical control is very good, particularly in your appropriate use of the present simple tense for describing (eating) habits.
Well done!

 

Marking Code

/\ Word(s) missing

- Omit word

C Capitalization

Gd Good

O Organisation

P Punctuation

PE Poorly expressed

R Register/Formality

SS Sentence Structure

S Spelling

T Tip

WF Wrong form

WO Word order

WT Wrong tense

WW Wrong word