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Paper: Part 2 Question
Write your review for the website users. (about 250 words) |
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Answer Click on the underlined words or phrases for comments. The numbers in brackets offer suggestions. General feedback appears below the essay. |
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Name: Farah Setton, Brazil
Film Review Fall
in New York {1}
is a very moving story, especially if you enjoy good romances.{***} |
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(1) This has all the ingredients of a good review, Farah, and your style is spot-on. I thought the range of your vocabulary was particularly good and your grammatical control is splendid on the whole. For the makeover, I reworded some expressions that didn't sound completely natural e.g. 'full of joy girl' and 'goes for it open-hearted'. In addition, you could think about organising this review into two or three paragraphs rather than beginning a each sentence on a new line. I enjoyed reading about this film. (I haven't seen it yet - I'll have to get it on video!) Best of luck in the CAE exam. Fiona Joseph 9.1.01 |
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