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Writing
Paper: Part 2 Question
Write your letter to the Principal of the school. (around 120-180 words) |
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Answer Click on the underlined words or phrases for comments. The numbers in brackets offer suggestions. General feedback appears below the essay. |
Alejandra
School: Bridges Dear Sir, I am writing with regard to your advertisement in the Sunday's{1} edition of Glamour, in which you offer an English course that meets my own expectations. I am interested in a twelve-month intensive English course, four or five hours per week if possible. I am 18 and have been studying English for ten years, which implies my level is high. However, I am sure I need to improve lots of things. Despite the fact {***} {2} I am quite good at grammar and use of English, I must admit I have difficulties in phrasal verbs and listening exercises. Apart from this, I would also like to improve my level of comprehension and vocabulary, through dynamic exercises which help me remember new words. {3} I am very interested in languages, and my favourite hobbies are reading, writing, and studying English as well as Italian. I consider all these activities are worthwhile since they make you develop your intellectual skills. Besides, I enjoy doing different activities every day in order to take advantage of the experience I may gain and the things I can learn. As I am not quite busy next week{4}, I would prefer to start on Monday, and would appreciate a reply at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Alejandra de Picciotto. |
| Feedback Alejandra, this is an excellent answer. You address all of the points in the task clearly and precisely, and your letter is organised appropriately. I also really like the way that you start and end your letter. This would leave the reader with an entirely positive impression. Apart from a couple of minor errors, your control of language is extremely good. I wish you every success in the exam. Best wishes Fiona Joseph 20.03.02 |
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