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Writing
Paper: Part 2 Question
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Answer Click on the underlined words or phrases for comments. The numbers in brackets offer suggestions. General feedback appears below the essay. |
Name: Zehra Hatipoglu
School: Kantonsschule Limmattal Switzerland The Science Museum - Technorama Technorama is a technical Centre in Winterthur. The motto of this Centre is: "Nothing will happen, unless you make it happen." In this museum you can touch almost everything you want. And you can explore technical phenomena with your five senses. {1} Lots of technical experiments can be done by visitors themselves. So it is also very interesting for children and teenagers. The museum has today 500 experiments about natural science. When I was there the first time I catched {2} a lot of important points about Physics. It is wonderful how you can learn by playing with experiments.Sometimes there are also demonstrations which are very impressive. You can visit this museum with your family, with friends or even with your school class and your teacher. You can spend your hole {3} afternoon for an excursion in the Technorama. I said hole afternoon because you need really time to visit the museum.{4} When you get hungry, there is also a restaurant where you can eat and drink something. I recommend this Science Museum for those who are interested in Physics, Chemistry and mathematics. |
| Feedback Well done, Zehra. You answer the question really well and the reader would be informed by your report. Your grammatical control is good - in fact, there are hardly any grammatical errors - and your range of vocabulary is pleasing. A good answer! Best wishes Fiona Joseph 1.10.01 |
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