Writing Paper: Part 2
Task type: Letter to an editor

Question
You are reading your favourite newspaper and you come across a letter which attacks the education system in your country (or a country that you know well).

Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper giving your response to Prof. Collins' letter (220-260 words)

Name: Augusto Yassuo Teoi

School: EPI-English Proficiency Institute

Dear Prof. Collins,

I am writing to express my agreement with the criticisms that you spread{1} in the news concerning our school system's hindrance. {2}

As you suitably mentioned, in the new century, named for {3} the researchers as the information era {4}, we'd better have our children well prepared to face the future job market, otherwise the globalized competitors will knock them down.{5}

Nevertheless, I have already realized that, as it is an ordinary concern in the population's opinion, drawing the politics' {6} attention to solve this problem might be an excellent short cut to raise funds to acquire some schools primary necessities.

Regarding the reforms that you've suggested, I would say that not only the schools are {7} poorly prepared but our teachers do not have the necessary tact to interact with the students. Maybe a recycling compulsory course{8} should {9} be a good way to take them out {10} from their desktop. It should probably cost less than renewing the hole team and indemnify all of them{11}.

I would be grateful if you could look into my suggestion. In case of further comments, I am available for a conversation.{12}

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully{13}

Augusto Yassuo Teoi